自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your response grammatically correct, concise, and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and incorrect phrases (e.g., "have" → "had", "per say" → "per se").

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a three‑wheeled bike, so it wasn’t a typical bicycle, and I often rode it with my cousin and sister, which sometimes led to harmless tumbles.

建議: Answer directly and use more precise language and linking words. Correct general grammar (e.g., "you were" → "they are" or "people of all ages"). Add one specific reason or an example to support your opinion. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in the Philippines. People of all ages ride them for leisure and short trips, and many also cycle regularly to stay fit. For example, I often see families riding along the park on weekends.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child and I remember tumbling with my cousin and my sister upon riding it.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I remember tumbling with my cousin and my sister while riding it.

The sentence incorrectly mixes present tense 'have' with past time reference 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'had' for possession in the past. Also replace 'upon riding it' with 'while riding it' for natural temporal phrasing. Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent; use 'had' for past possession and 'while' for simultaneous actions.

× It is a three wheeled bike, so it's not a bicycle first per say.

✓ It was a three-wheeled bike, so it wasn't really a bicycle.

Use past tense 'was' to match the past context. 'Three-wheeled' needs a hyphen as a compound adjective before a noun. 'Per say' is a misspelling of 'per se'; however, 'really' is more natural here. Also 'bicycle' vs 'bike' distinction is stylistic; keep tense consistent. Suggestion: use hyphenated compound adjectives and correct idiom 'per se' or replace with 'really'.

× Yes, bikes are popular here in the Philippines. People ride it even if you were a child or an adult.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular here in the Philippines. People ride them whether you are a child or an adult.

The plural subject 'people' requires the plural object pronoun 'them', not 'it'. Also the conditional comparison should use 'whether' and keep tense/person consistent: 'you are' rather than 'you were' when stating a general fact. Suggestion: use 'them' for plural pronouns, 'whether' for alternatives, and present tense for general truths.

× They use it for leisure or as an activity that will help them lose weight.

✓ They use them for leisure or as activities that help them lose weight.

Refer back to 'bikes' with plural pronoun 'them' and plural noun 'activities' to match plurality. For general statements, present simple 'help' is preferred over 'will help'. Also 'for leisure' is fine but must match plurals. Suggestion: ensure pronoun and noun number agreement and use present simple for habitual/general facts.