自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar (tense and articles), reduce redundancy, and add a clear topic sentence plus one specific supporting detail. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep answers within 3–4 sentences. For example, correct tense: 'I had a white bike.' Add a reason or brief anecdote and use 'also' or 'besides' to link ideas.

範例: Yes — I had a white bike when I was a child. I used it to cycle to school most days, and on weekends I would ride to the park for exercise. Besides being practical, it was my main way to meet friends after class.

建議: Avoid repetition and improve grammar and word choice. Start with a clear opinion sentence, then give two specific reasons with linking words (for example, 'because' and 'for instance'). Correct plural and article use ('students', 'a bike-sharing system called YouBike'). Keep it concise and natural.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. For example, Taipei has a bike-sharing system called YouBike that many people use, especially students. Because it's cheap and convenient, I use it frequently as well.

× Yes I have a bike and it's white and I remember I use it to go to school and on the weekend I also ride it to the park to for exercise purpose.

✓ Yes, I had a bike and it was white, and I remember I used it to go to school, and on weekends I also rode it to the park for exercise.

The speaker is talking about past habits and memories, so past tense should be used (had, was, used, rode). Also use 'on weekends' for habitual actions and remove the unnecessary word 'to' before 'for exercise'. Add commas for clarity.

× I I think so, because we have a bike named you bike in Taipei City and especially student is the most popular group to use this facility and I'm also one of them.

✓ I think so, because we have a bike system called YouBike in Taipei City, and students are the most common group to use this facility; I'm also one of them.

Use plural 'students' to refer to the group (singular/plural issue). Also provide clearer noun choice 'bike system' and correct name capitalization. 'Students are' ensures subject-verb agreement and correct plurality.

× So I think bike is popular in my country.

✓ So I think bikes are popular in my country.

When speaking generally about types of bicycles, use the plural 'bikes' and plural verb 'are' to match (singular/plural issue). This expresses general prevalence correctly.