自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer grammatically correct, more natural, and add a brief supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason or short consequence. Use linking words like 'because' correctly and keep it concise (1–3 sentences).

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. As a result, I usually walked or took public transport to school.

建議: Keep the answer natural and add a clearer general statement plus one specific supporting detail. Use a linking word such as 'for example' or 'for instance' to introduce your observation. Aim for 2–3 sentences and correct small tense/word-choice issues.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in the Philippines. For example, I often see many children and adults cycling in residential areas and markets, especially on weekends.

× I do not have a bike when I was a kid because of financial problem.

✓ I did not have a bike when I was a kid because of financial problems.

The sentence mixes present tense 'do not have' with past time marker 'when I was a kid'. Use past simple 'did not have' to match past context. Also pluralize 'problem' to 'problems' or use 'a financial problem'. Suggestion: say 'I did not have a bike when I was a kid because of financial problems.'

× I think bikes are popular here in the Philippines because I saw a lot of kids playing outside in the streets.

✓ I think bikes are popular here in the Philippines because I see a lot of kids playing outside in the streets.

The main clause 'I think' is present, so supporting evidence should use present tense 'I see' rather than past 'I saw' to be consistent. Alternatively, if referring to a past observation, change main clause to past: 'I thought... because I saw...'. Suggestion: use consistent tenses, e.g. 'I think bikes are popular here in the Philippines because I see a lot of kids playing outside in the streets.'