自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Focus on accurate grammar, correct word choice, and clearer sentence structure. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and pronunciation errors (e.g., bike, borrow, hurt).

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My parents never bought one for me, and although my cousin owned a bike, they wouldn't let me borrow it because they were worried I might get hurt.

建議: Improve sentence variety and grammar (subject-verb agreement, plural/singular), and add clearer, specific examples. Use linking words (for example, because) to connect ideas and keep responses within 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people ride their bikes for short distances, sometimes five kilometres or more, because it is good exercise and inexpensive. In addition, many students and commuters use bikes to get to school or work.

× No I don't have a vibe when I was a child even my mom and dad didn't buy me one.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child; even my mom and dad didn't buy me one.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't have' with the past time reference 'when I was a child'. Use the past simple 'didn't have' to match the past context. Also 'vibe' is a wrong word choice; the correct noun is 'bike'. Add a comma after 'No' and use a semicolon or conjunction to connect clauses for clarity. Suggestion: use past simple consistently for past events (I didn't have a bike).

× Also I see a bite of my cousin but they didn't let me borrow it since they might I might get hurt Harding to them.

✓ Also I saw my cousin's bike, but they didn't let me borrow it because they thought I might get hurt according to them.

'See' should be past 'saw' to match past context. 'Bite' is incorrect; use 'bike'. Use the possessive form 'my cousin's bike' instead of 'a bike of my cousin'. 'They' as plural is acceptable if cousins are multiple; if singular cousin, use 'he' or 'she'. The clause 'since they might I might get hurt Harding to them' is ungrammatical: use 'because they thought I might get hurt' or 'according to them'. Remove the extraneous 'Harding'. Ensure correct clause order and verb tense. Suggestion: choose correct noun, possessive, and past tense verbs, and replace unclear fragments with 'because they thought I might get hurt'.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country I see a bikers that ride a bike of almost 5 kilometer and more.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. I see bikers who ride for almost 5 kilometers or more.

Run-on sentence: separate into two sentences or use a conjunction. 'I see a bikers' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'bikers'; remove 'a' and use 'bikers' or 'a biker'. Use relative pronoun 'who' instead of 'that' for people. 'Ride a bike of almost 5 kilometer' is awkward: use 'ride for almost 5 kilometers'. Plural 'kilometers' is required for quantities greater than one. Suggestion: fix article usage, subject-verb agreement, and use 'for' with distance and pluralize units.

× It's a kind of exercise and it's really fun.

✓ It's a kind of exercise, and it's really fun.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable but needs a comma before the conjunction when joining two independent clauses. No tense or agreement errors; keep contractions consistent. Suggestion: add punctuation for clarity.

× Bikes is popular since it's a kind of transportation to work or if you are going to school so it's.

✓ Bikes are popular since they're a form of transportation to work or school.

Subject 'Bikes' is plural, so the verb must be 'are' not 'is' (subject-verb agreement). 'It's a kind of transportation to work or if you are going to school so it's' is redundant and ungrammatical; simplify to 'they're a form of transportation to work or school'. Use plural pronoun 'they' or contraction 'they're'. Remove unnecessary 'so it's'. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree in number and avoid redundant phrases.