自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and use past tense consistently. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details linked logically. Avoid filler words (uh, oh) and keep it concise (max 5 sentences).

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to visit my friends and go to the park almost every weekend. Because my neighborhood was safe and close to school, cycling was my main way to get around.

建議: Answer directly and use clearer vocabulary and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, 'for instance' or 'also') and give a specific example or reason. Avoid awkward phrases like 'child bike' and correct subject-verb agreement.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For instance, many cities run public bike-sharing schemes that let people borrow bikes for short trips, which makes cycling a convenient and affordable option for commuting and errands.

× Uh, yes. Oh, I do have a bike. And actually I like riding a bike during my childhood.

✓ Uh, yes. I did have a bike. I actually liked riding a bike during my childhood.

The student uses present tense ('do have', 'like') while referring to a past period ('childhood'). This is a tense error. Use past simple ('did have', 'liked') to match the time frame. Suggestion: identify the time marker (childhood) first and use past forms for verbs about that period.

× Yes, uh, child bike is very popular transportation in my country.

✓ Yes, child bicycles are a very popular form of transportation in my country.

'Child bike' is incorrect noun form and singular/plural mismatch. Use plural 'bicycles' for a general statement and include an article or phrase 'a very popular form of transportation.' Suggestion: use plural nouns for general facts and pair with appropriate articles or classifiers.

× Actually our city provide the free bike for someone who is uh, on the road and want to go to some place in the very short distance.

✓ Actually, our city provides free bikes for people who are on the road and want to go to a nearby place.

Multiple pronoun and verb errors: 'our city provide' needs third-person singular agreement ('provides'); 'the free bike' should be plural or no article for general service ('free bikes'); 'someone' and 'want' mismatch—use plural 'people who want' or 'someone who wants.' Also 'in the very short distance' is unnatural; use 'to a nearby place.' Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement, match singular/plural between pronouns and verbs, and choose natural prepositional phrases.