自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your response repeated the examiner's question and contains grammatical errors, so it did not answer the question. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences). For example, state whether you had a bike, mention when you got it or who gave it to you, and describe how often you used it or a memorable experience.

範例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I got it as a gift from my parents when I was seven, and I rode it to school most days. Because the roads near my house were quiet, I felt independent and spent hours practicing tricks with my friends.

建議: You simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and an example. Use linking words like 'because', 'however' or 'for example' to make your response coherent and concise. Aim for natural vocabulary relevant to transport and culture.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country because many people use them for short journeys and exercise. For example, in cities you often see commuters cycling in the morning, although in rural areas cars are more common due to longer distances.

× 'Did you have a bike when you were over a child?'

✓ 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?'

'The phrase "when you were over a child" is ungrammatical. The correct idiomatic expression is "when you were a child." This is a present/past time reference issue: the word "over" is unnecessary and changes meaning. Remove "over" to make the sentence natural and grammatically correct. Suggestion: use "when you were a child" to refer to the period in childhood.'

× 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?'

✓ 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?'

'This sentence is already correct. It uses the present simple "do you think" to ask about a general opinion and "are popular" to describe a general state. No correction needed.'