自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the response more natural and coherent by using a clear topic sentence, correct tense consistency, and one or two supporting details. Avoid repetition and incorrect pronouns (use 'it was' for past, 'I used it' for past habitual). Add a linking word to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was blue, and I used it almost every day to get to school and visit friends, which helped me become comfortable riding in traffic.

建議: Give a direct topic sentence, then add specific supporting details with correct grammar and linking words. Use plural forms when speaking generally ("they are used") and replace unclear phrases like "I see it on raising" with a specific observation (e.g., "I've noticed more people using them recently").

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many daily commuters use them to travel short distances, and in recent years I have noticed more bike lanes and bicycle-sharing programs in cities.

× Yes, I did have a bike and its color is blue.

✓ Yes, I did have a bike and its color was blue.

The sentence mixes past reference ('did have') with present verb 'is'. Maintain past tense to match the question 'when you were a child'. Change 'is' to 'was' to keep consistent past time reference. Suggestion: Use consistent tense; for example, 'I had a bike and its color was blue.'

× It is used every day because I use it for work.

✓ I used it every day because I used it for work.

The question asks about past possession; the student should use past tense. 'Is used every day' and 'I use it' are present tense and conflict with past context. Change both verbs to past tense for consistency. Suggestion: Keep verbs aligned with past context: 'I used it every day because I used it for work.'

× Yes, bikes are popular in our country and it is used by daily commuters to go to work and also I see it on raising.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country and they are used by daily commuters to go to work, and I also see them increasing in number.

Several issues: 'it' refers to 'bikes' (plural) so use 'they'. 'is used' should be 'are used' for plural subject (subject-verb agreement). The phrase 'I see it on raising' is ungrammatical and unclear; likely intended to say 'I see them increasing' or 'I see their numbers rising'. Replace with 'I also see them increasing in number' for clarity. Suggestion: Ensure pronouns and verbs agree in number with their antecedent and use a clear expression for 'rising in number'.