自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: This answer does not address the question. It greets and asks about pronunciation rather than saying whether you had a bike. To improve, respond directly with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), give one or two specific supporting details, and keep the reply natural and concise. Use linking words if adding a second detail.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it almost every day to ride to my friend’s house and to the park, so I became pretty confident cycling by age eight.

建議: This answer again fails to address the examiner’s question. Instead of asking about pronunciation, answer the question directly with a clear opinion and specific reasons or examples. Keep it to a maximum of about 3–4 short sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you often see commuters and students cycling to work or school, especially when traffic is heavy.

× Hi and Assalamualaikum, can you tell me which pronunciation you use, American or British?

✓ Hi and Assalamualaikum. Can you tell me which pronunciation you use: American or British?

The sentence begins with a greeting then runs into a question without proper sentence separation and punctuation. This is primarily a punctuation and clause boundary issue related to pronoun and sentence structure: split into two sentences and capitalize the question. Use a colon or question mark before listing options. Also 'pronunciation you use' is acceptable, but punctuation clarifies meaning. Improve by separating the greeting from the question and using appropriate punctuation.

× Hi and Assalamualaikum, can you tell me which pronunciation you use, American or British?

✓ Hi and Assalamualaikum. Can you tell me which pronunciation you use: American or British?

Same sentence appears twice; correct it the same way. Separate the greeting from the question with a period, capitalize the following sentence, and use a colon or question mark before presenting alternatives. This improves clarity and conforms to standard English sentence structure.