自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 문장 구조가 간단하고 직접적으로 질문에 답했지만, 더 자연스럽고 풍부한 응답을 위해 주제 문장 뒤에 구체적인 세부사항(예: 언제부터 언제까지, 어떤 종류의 자전거였는지, 자전거를 타면서 기억에 남는 경험)을 추가하세요. 또한 'kid' 보다는 'child' 또는 'when I was young' 같은 표현을 상황에 맞게 사용하면 더 포멀하고 자연스럽습니다. 한 답변은 최대 5문장 이내로 유지하고, 불필요한 반복은 피하세요.

範例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was a small red bike with training wheels, and I got it as a birthday present when I was six. I remember practicing in the park near my house with my older brother, which taught me confidence and balance. Overall, riding that bike was one of my favorite childhood activities.

建議: 의견을 제시했지만 문법 오류와 비논리적 근거 제시로 설득력이 떨어집니다. 문법적으로는 'I always riding' 대신 'I always ride' 또는 'I often see people riding'로 고쳐야 합니다. 또한 개인 경험만으로 일반화를 하기보다 통계적 근거, 예시(예: 자전거 전용 도로, 출퇴근 이용, 대중화된 자전거 공유 시스템)나 비교(과거와 현재)를 덧붙여 구체성을 높이세요. 연결어(for example, because, such as)를 사용해 응답을 논리적으로 구성하세요.

範例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. For example, many cities now have dedicated bike lanes and a bike-sharing system, so lots of people use bicycles for commuting. I also often see people cycling to work or school, especially during the warmer months.

× I think bikes are popular in our country because I always riding a bike in public every day.

✓ I think bikes are popular in our country because I always ride a bike in public every day.

The error is the incorrect use of the base verb after an auxiliary or adverb: 'always riding' is a present participle phrase that cannot directly follow the subject 'I' to express habitual action here. The correct form is the simple present 'I always ride' to indicate a regular habit. Use the base form (ride) with adverbs of frequency for habitual actions (I always ride).