自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你在回答时没有正面回应问题，而且句子有明显的发音或拼写错误（“big”应为“bike”），导致信息不清。建议：1) 注意听清问题并直接作答；2) 回答要有主题句并补充一两句具体细节（何时、为什么或举例）；3) 控制长度在最多5句并使用连接词如“because”或“when”。练习时可先在脑中快速整理要点再说。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it as a gift from my parents when I was seven, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood every weekend. Because it was small and bright red, many friends wanted to borrow it.

建議: 你的回答没有直接回答考官的问题，反而重复了上一题的内容，缺乏相关性和具体细节。建议：1) 直接回应观点（Yes/No/It depends）；2) 用1–2句具体说明原因或举例并使用连接词如“because”或“for example”；3) 避免重复无关内容，保持简洁明确。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting to avoid traffic. For example, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and shared bikes which many students and office workers use every day.

× Did you have a big when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

句子中缺少名词“bike”，导致句子不完整，属于句子结构错误（26）。应在big后补上名词以构成完整的名词短语。“big”是形容词，需要修饰名词。建议：在使用形容词时，注意其后必须跟被修饰的名词，例如“a big bike”。

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

该句本身时态正确（过去时），与提问“Did you have a bike when you were a child?”相匹配，因此无需更改。说明：使用一般过去时表述过去拥有的事物是正确的。