自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời hiện tại rất khó hiểu và ngữ pháp sai. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (có/không và ngắn gọn mô tả), sau đó thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể (ai cho, độ tuổi, tần suất sử dụng hoặc cảm xúc). Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản nếu cần (e.g., and, because, when). Giữ tổng cộng không quá 5 câu.

範例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I rode it every day after school. I especially enjoyed cycling with my friends in the neighborhood because it felt free and fun.

建議: Câu trả lời ngắn, ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai. Trả lời trực tiếp ngay đầu (Yes/No) rồi giải thích lý do, đưa ví dụ hoặc so sánh hiện tại và trước đây nếu muốn. Dùng liên từ để nối ý (for example, because, but). Cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng chính xác như "popular", "common", "in recent years".

範例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips and exercise, especially in cities with bike lanes. However, they were more common in the past when fewer people could afford motorbikes or cars.

× Leave a bike when you're.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence has incorrect word choice and structure. 'Leave' is wrong here; the student likely meant 'I had'. 'You're' is a contraction of 'you are', which is incorrect in past reference. Use past simple 'had' and 'I was a child' to match the examiner's past-tense question. Suggestion: replace 'Leave' with 'I had' and 'you're' with 'I was'. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Yes, I take her are popular in the past.

✓ Yes, I think bikes were popular in the past.

The original sentence contains multiple errors: 'take her' is incorrect word choice and likely intended as 'think', and 'are' conflicts with the time phrase 'in the past'. Use past-tense 'were' to agree with 'in the past'. Also include the subject 'bikes' for clarity. Suggestion: replace 'take her' with 'think', and change 'are' to 'were' to maintain past tense consistency. Grammar problem type ID: 6