自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 句子结构和词汇使用有明显错误，导致考官难以理解你的意思。建议：1) 先用一个简单清晰的主题句直接回答问题（如：Yes, I did. 或 No, I didn’t.）。2) 使用正确的时态和常用词汇（过去式，例如 “I had a bike”）。3) 在补充细节时用一两句说明，比如什么时候、什么样的自行车或你如何使用它，使用连接词如 “because” 或 “when” 来衔接句子。4) 控制在最多5句内，保持自然流畅。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about eight years old, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon. Because it was light and easy to handle, I quickly learned tricks like riding with no hands. I remember being very proud of it until I outgrew it.

建議: 回答过于简短，缺乏支持性细节。建议：1) 开头用完整句子直接回答（例如 “Yes, I do.”）。2) 随后提供1–2个具体理由或例子说明观点，例如骑行人数、通勤用途或政府自行车道建设等，用连接词如 “because”, “for example” 来组织内容。3) 保持句子简洁，最多5句。

範例: Yes, I do. Bicycles are very popular in my country, especially in cities where many people use them to commute to work because they are cheap and convenient. For example, my neighbor cycles to the subway station every day, and several cities have built dedicated bike lanes to encourage cycling.

× Do did you have back when you were checked?

✓ Did you have a bike back when you were a child?

句子结构不正确，混用了现在时助动词“Do”和过去时助动词“did”，并且缺少宾语“a bike”，将“checked”误用替代“child”。应该使用过去时提问句结构“Did + 主语 + 动词原形”，并保留与考官问题相对应的名词短语和时间状语。建议：在构成一般过去时的疑问句时只使用助动词 did，动词用原形；注意不要把单词拼错或误用（child 而不是 checked）。