自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more direct and structured: start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid vague phrasing like “because I like every day” and correct grammar (e.g. tense and word choice). Also keep answers concise (no more than 3–4 sentences).

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in the Philippines. For example, many people ride bikes for morning exercise and short commutes, especially in residential areas. Furthermore, during the pandemic bicycle sales increased, so cycling has become more common as a healthy and affordable transport option.

× Well certainly yes, because I like every day.

✓ Well, certainly yes, because I like to ride every day.

The original sentence lacks the appropriate verb and object to express the habitual action. 'Like' as a verb usually needs an object or a verb phrase (like 'to ride') when describing an activity. Using 'like to ride every day' clarifies the action and fits present simple tense for habitual actions. Suggestion: include the activity (ride a bike) after 'like' or use 'enjoy riding' (e.g., 'I enjoy riding every day').

× I usually see lots of people who tend to do their morning rides using their bikes here in the Philippines.

✓ I usually see lots of people who tend to do their morning rides on their bikes here in the Philippines.

The phrase 'using their bikes' is not wrong but 'on their bikes' is the more natural prepositional choice for describing riding a bicycle. This is a preposition/natural collocation preference that affects pronoun phrase placement and idiomatic usage. Suggestion: use 'on their bikes' or rephrase to 'who go for morning rides on their bikes' for clearer, more natural English.