自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence (past tense), then add one or two supporting details using linking words. Keep it under five sentences and avoid repetition. For example, mention whether you had one, why or why not, and a short memory or consequence.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn't afford one at the time, so I usually walked to school instead. Because of that, I became used to long walks and rarely learned to ride.

建議: Answer the question directly, then give specific reasons and use linking words for coherence. Avoid absolute or negative words like 'useless' without explanation. Limit to up to five sentences and provide examples or comparisons to make your point clearer.

範例: No, bikes are not very popular in my country. One reason is that the cities are not very bike-friendly, with few bike lanes and heavy traffic. As a result, most people prefer cars or motorbikes for convenience, so many families don't consider buying bicycles for children.

× I don't have a bike when I have when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The student mixes present tense ('don't have', 'have') with past time 'when I was a child'. Use simple past 'didn't have' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: use 'didn't have' for negative statements about the past and avoid mixing tenses.

× No bike is not popular in my country, that's why my family didn't buy me a bike because it's useless anyway.

✓ Bikes are not very popular in my country, so my family didn't buy me a bike because they thought it was useless.

Multiple issues: 'No bike is not popular' is awkward and incorrect. Use plural 'bikes' when speaking generally. Also pronoun agreement: 'they thought it was useless' refers to the family (plural). Maintain past tense 'didn't buy' and past perspective 'thought'. Suggestion: use plural for general statements (bikes), use 'so' or 'therefore' to link reasons, and ensure pronouns match their antecedents.