自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it has grammatical errors, some unnatural phrasing, and minor redundancy. Improve accuracy and naturalness by using correct verb forms, more concise phrasing, and a clear topic sentence followed by one or two supporting details. Use linking words (for example, "and" or "so") only when needed. Replace "I love it to walk, to ride on the neighborhood" with a natural expression like "I loved riding it around the neighborhood."

範例: Yes — I had a BMX when I was a child. It was white and red with guards over the wheels, and I loved riding it around the neighborhood because it was sturdy and looked great.

建議: Good content and relevant supporting details. To improve, correct grammar (verb forms and gerunds), use smoother linking, and be slightly more specific with examples. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific reasons or examples using linking words like "because" or "for example."

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, in my region many people enjoy mountain biking because we have numerous trails; it’s a great way to keep fit and enjoy the scenery.

× It was a beautiful bike and I love it to walk, to ride on the neighborhood.

✓ It was a beautiful bike and I loved to walk and ride around the neighborhood.

Sentence mixes past and present tenses. The context is past (when the student was a child), so 'love' should be past 'loved'. The phrase 'to walk, to ride on the neighborhood' is awkward: use parallel gerunds 'to walk and ride' or simply 'walk and ride', and use 'around the neighborhood' for correct preposition. Suggestion: keep past tense for all verbs and use 'around' for location.

× People love ride bicycles over the mountains.

✓ People love riding bicycles in the mountains.

After 'love' a gerund ('riding') is required rather than the base verb 'ride'. Also the preposition 'over the mountains' is unnatural for riding; use 'in the mountains' to indicate location. Suggestion: use 'love riding' and 'in the mountains'.

× Here in my region, we have a lot of mountains and people love to mountain biking.

✓ Here in my region, we have a lot of mountains and people love mountain biking.

After 'love' both 'love to V' and 'love V-ing' are possible, but 'love to mountain biking' is incorrect because 'mountain biking' is a noun/gerund phrase; you should say 'love mountain biking' or 'love to go mountain biking'. Suggestion: remove 'to' or rephrase as 'love to go mountain biking'.

× It's a good way to stay fit and to appreciate the landscapes.

✓ It's a good way to stay fit and appreciate the landscape.

Use parallel structure: after 'to' keep consistency or omit 'to' for the second verb: 'to stay fit and appreciate' or 'stay fit and appreciate'. Also 'landscapes' is acceptable but 'the landscape' is more natural when referring generally. Suggestion: use parallel verbs and the singular 'landscape' for general reference.

× People love ride bicycles over the mountains.

✓ People love riding bicycles in the mountains.

This addresses structure: 'love ride' is ungrammatical; need gerund. Also 'over the mountains' misuses preposition. Suggestion: reorder and use correct verb form and preposition.