自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar, tense consistency and provide a clearer, more natural response. Start with a direct topic sentence in the past tense, then give one specific supporting detail using a linking word. For example, correct verb forms (had, didn't have) and avoid irrelevant mention of a license for childhood biking unless explained. Keep the answer within 2–4 sentences.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, my parents preferred to buy me a skateboard, so I learned to ride that around the neighborhood.

建議: Clarify meaning and fix word choice and logic. Use a clear topic sentence, then give specific supporting reasons with linking words. Avoid contradictions (e.g., saying “by car”) and use appropriate verbs (ride a bike, drive a car). Provide one or two concrete reasons or examples.

範例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. For example, many people use them for short trips and exercise because they are inexpensive and convenient, especially in crowded urban areas.

× No, I don't have bike when I was child because I don't have my license.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I didn't have my license.

This sentence describes past time, so past tense verbs are required (use 'didn't have' not 'don't have'). Also use the countable noun with an article: 'a bike'. Include the article 'a' before 'child' to form 'a child'. Additionally, maintain consistent past tense in both clauses ('didn't have' for both). Suggestion: change present-tense auxiliary 'do/does' to past 'did' and add the indefinite article before countable nouns.

× Yes, by car. Very popular in my country because they are very comfortable to drive.

✓ Yes, cars are very popular in my country because they are very convenient to drive.

The original reply is fragmentary and mismatches subject and pronoun: 'Yes, by car.' is not a full answer to 'Do you think bikes are popular?'. It mistakenly uses 'they' referring to an unclear noun; if the student meant 'cars', use 'cars' as the subject and a full sentence. 'Comfortable to drive' is acceptable but 'convenient to drive' is more natural. Ensure subject-verb agreement ('cars are') and provide a complete sentence that directly answers the question. If the student intended to say bikes are popular, rephrase accordingly (e.g., 'Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are convenient to ride.').