自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Сократите паузы и запинки, используйте правильную артикльную и числовую форму, и стройте предложение более естественно. Например, скажите прямо, что у вас не было велосипеда, но был скейтборд, объясните причину в одном связном предложении и избегайте повторов («more, more»). Также исправьте грамматику: «a skateboard» и «cheaper» по сравнению с велосипедом. Максимум 3–4 предложения.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I had a skateboard instead because it was cheaper and easier to carry. It was also more comfortable for short trips around my neighborhood, so I preferred it to a bike.

建議: Уберите вокальные паузы («uh»), используйте связующие слова для плавности и корректную грамматику (например, «in summer» без артикля, «this type of vehicle» можно заменить на «bicycles»). Сделайте ответ более конкретным: добавьте причину популярности и, если возможно, краткое сравнение или пример. Не превышайте 4 предложений.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are becoming very popular in my country. Nowadays more and more people buy bicycles, especially in summer, because they are cheap and good for short trips. For example, many students and commuters use them to avoid traffic.

× I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I had skateboard because it's more, more, uh, cheaper and, uh, comfortable.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I had a skateboard because it was cheaper and more comfortable.

The sentence omits the indefinite article before 'skateboard' (singular countable noun), causing a singular/plural/article error. Also 'more, more, uh, cheaper' incorrectly combines comparative markers; use either 'cheaper' or 'more cheap' (the correct form is 'cheaper'). Tense of the clause referring to childhood should be past ('it was'). Suggestion: add 'a' before 'skateboard', remove repeated filler words, use 'cheaper' and place comparatives in correct order: 'cheaper and more comfortable'.

× Nowadays more and more people uh buy this type of vehicle in my country, especially on summer, bikes are the most popular choice uh, in Russia.

✓ Nowadays more and more people buy this type of vehicle in my country; especially in summer, bikes are the most popular choice in Russia.

The phrase 'on summer' uses the wrong preposition. The correct preposition for seasons is 'in' (in summer). Additionally, the clause punctuation should separate ideas (use a semicolon or period) and avoid redundant 'uh' fillers. Suggestion: use 'in summer' and improve sentence flow: 'Nowadays more and more people buy this type of vehicle in my country. In summer, bikes are the most popular choice in Russia.'