自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và trình bày rõ ràng: trả lời trực tiếp rồi bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh lỗi thì (sử dụng quá khứ cho hành động trong quá khứ), loại bỏ từ thừa và sắp xếp câu mạch lạc. Ví dụ cấu trúc: topic sentence (Yes/No + short statement) + 1–2 câu bổ trợ với linking word như "because" hoặc "so". Hãy dùng tối đa 4-5 câu và từ vựng đơn giản nhưng chính xác.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my aunt gave me for my eighth birthday. Because I lived near a park, I rode it almost every day with my friends. I remember learning to ride without training wheels in our driveway.

建議: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và giải thích rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và tiếng náo. Dùng linking words như "because" hoặc "however" để liên kết ý, cung cấp một hoặc hai lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ nếu cần. Kiểm soát số câu (không quá 5) và dùng thì hiện tại để nói về thói quen hiện tại.

範例: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because most people prefer motorbikes for daily transportation. For example, motorbikes are faster in traffic and easier to park. However, bikes are becoming more common in some cities where people want to exercise or avoid pollution.

× When I was a child, I have been is involved in it was a gift from my aunt.

✓ When I was a child, I was involved with bikes; one was a gift from my aunt.

The original sentence mixes tenses and contains extra words causing sentence structure errors. Use past simple 'was involved' to match 'When I was a child'. 'Have been' and 'is' are incorrect here. Also separate the ideas: involvement with bikes and the fact that a bike was a gift. Suggestion: Keep consistent past tense and split into clear clauses: 'I was involved with bikes' and 'one was a gift from my aunt.'

× I don't think so because in my country people use motorbike a lot and and it it my MMM.

✓ I don't think so because people in my country use motorbikes a lot, and it is more common.

Errors: 'motorbike' should be plural ('motorbikes') when speaking generally (plural issue). Word order 'in my country people' is acceptable but 'people in my country' is more natural. The sentence has repeated words ('and and it it') and an unclear filler 'my MMM.' Replace with a clear phrase like 'it is more common.' Suggestion: Use plural for general statements, avoid repetitions and fillers, and finish the sentence with a clear comparative or explanatory phrase.