自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is short, contains an inappropriate word (“hurt”) and does not directly or naturally respond to the question. Give a clear topic sentence and add 1–2 supporting details using linking words. For example, say whether you had a bike, why or why not, and one brief detail about how that affected you.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. As a result, I usually walked or took the bus to school, so I didn’t learn to ride until I was a teenager.

建議: The reply is too short and vague. Provide a direct statement and support it with a specific reason or example using linking words (e.g., because, for example, therefore). Mention who uses bikes and in what situations to make your answer more informative and natural.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting in cities. For example, in my city there are dedicated bike lanes and many students and office workers cycle to avoid traffic.

× No, I did not hurt.

✓ No, I did not have one.

The student used 'hurt' which refers to injury, not possession. The question asks about having a bike in childhood, so the correct response needs a verb for possession. Use 'have' in past tense negative form 'did not have'. Also ensure pronoun usage is appropriate; here no pronoun change is needed. Suggestion: Replace verbs that don't match the intended meaning with the correct verb for possession (have), and keep past simple negative structure 'did not + base verb'.

× Most probably.

✓ Yes, they are quite popular.

The short reply 'Most probably' is informal and does not directly answer the present-tense question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?'. Use present simple tense to express a general state: 'are' + adjective 'popular'. This provides a complete sentence and fits the present-tense question. Suggestion: Use a full sentence in present simple when answering general questions (Subject + are/is + complement).