自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a brief reason or additional detail using linking words. Avoid redundant words (e.g. “and I was a child” is unnecessary). Also keep to at most 3–4 short sentences and use more specific detail (where or why you got a bike at 18).

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child. I only bought one when I turned 18 because I needed it to commute to college. Since then I’ve used it mainly for short trips around town.

建議: Respond directly and avoid double negatives and vague phrases. Begin with a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons and an example using linking words (e.g. “because,” “for example,” “as a result”). Also correct grammar (use “aren’t” or “are not,” not “aren't not”) and tighten wording.

範例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because many people prefer public transport. For example, the metro and buses have expanded recently and are affordable and convenient, so most commuters choose them over cycling.

× No, I did not have a bike and I was a child.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence is missing the temporal clause connector 'when' to link 'I was a child' to 'did not have a bike.' Without 'when' the second clause is a fragment and the sentence structure is incorrect. Use 'when I was a child' to indicate the time period: 'I did not have a bike when I was a child.'

× I only got a bike when I turned 18.

✓ I only got a bike when I turned 18.

This sentence is already correct in tense and form. It uses simple past appropriately to describe a past event ('got') and a time marker ('when I turned 18'). No change needed.

× No, bikes aren't not that popular in my country because the people prefer the public transportation which has been improving ever since the beginning.

✓ No, bikes are not that popular in my country because people prefer public transportation, which has been improving steadily.

The original contains a double negative 'aren't not' which reverses meaning and is ungrammatical; choose either 'are not' or 'aren't' but not both. 'The people' is unnatural in this context; use 'people.' 'Public transportation' does not need 'the' when speaking generally. 'Ever since the beginning' is vague; 'steadily' or 'over time' is clearer. Also add a comma before the nonrestrictive clause 'which has been improving steadily.'