自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be natural, concise and accurate. Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence (you are talking about childhood), then give two or three specific details using linking words. Avoid fillers (uh) and incorrect grammar (e.g. tense, word order). Use correct vocabulary: say "training wheels" or "stabilisers," not "assistant rails," and "four wheels" not "UH-4 wheels."

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was mainly red and black, and my dad bought it for me. Because I was just learning, it had training wheels and a small comfortable seat, which made me feel safe while I practised.

建議: Answer directly with a clear opinion sentence, then support it with two specific reasons linked logically. Use correct collocations ("in my opinion" not "from my opinion"), plural/singular agreement ("transport system" or "public transport" ), and avoid fillers. Finish the thought instead of trailing off.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. In my opinion, this is because public transport is often unreliable and many people cannot afford cars, so bicycles are an affordable and convenient way to get around, especially in crowded cities.

× Yes, I do have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The examiner asked about having a bike when you were a child (past time). The present tense 'do have' is incorrect for a past context. Use simple past 'had' to match the time reference. Suggestion: Pay attention to time expressions (when I was a child) and use past tense verbs accordingly.

× When I was a child my dad bothered for uh, For me, it is mainly red and black.

✓ When I was a child my dad bought it for me. It was mainly red and black.

'Bothered for' is incorrect; the intended verb is likely 'bought' or 'brought'. Also 'for me' should follow the verb. Because the event is in the past, use past tense 'bought' and 'was' for description. Suggestion: Use correct verbs for actions (buy/bought) and match tense with the time marker 'when I was a child'.

× Uh, It is not a normal bike because it's for designed for beginners.

✓ It was not a normal bike because it was designed for beginners.

The phrase 'for designed' is ungrammatical; use the passive 'designed for' or simply 'designed' with past tense to match the past context. Also change 'is' to 'was' because the speaker refers to the past. Suggestion: Use 'designed for beginners' or 'was designed for beginners' when describing purpose in the past.

× It has two assistant rails.

✓ It had two assistant rails.

First, use past tense 'had' to match 'when I was a child.' Second, 'assistant rails' is unusual; 'training wheels' or 'supporting rails' is more natural, but as a grammar correction, keep the plural form consistent and past tense. Suggestion: Use 'training wheels' for clarity: 'It had two training wheels.'

× Uh, it has UH-4 wheels in total.

✓ It had four wheels in total.

Use words or digits consistently and past tense 'had' because the event occurred in the past. 'UH-4' is incorrect filler and formatting; write 'four wheels in total.' Suggestion: Avoid filler and use clear numbers: 'It had four wheels in total.'

× Uh, bikes are really popular in my country from my opinion, because, uh, my country has a poor transport uh, systems and uh, people are not generally that rich.

✓ Bikes are really popular in my country in my opinion, because my country has poor transport systems and people are not generally that rich.

Use the standard phrase 'in my opinion' rather than 'from my opinion.' Remove unnecessary commas and fillers. 'A poor transport systems' is incorrect article-number agreement; drop 'a' and pluralize 'systems' with 'poor' unchanged. Suggestion: Use 'in my opinion' and ensure articles match countable nouns ('transport systems' without 'a').

× So bike is uh, undoubtedly one of the best options to uh.

✓ So bikes are undoubtedly one of the best options.

Use plural 'bikes' or add an article 'The bike' for general statements; here plural 'bikes are' is natural. Remove the unfinished phrase 'to uh' and filler. Use present tense 'are' because this is a general statement about current popularity. Suggestion: For general truths use plural nouns or the definite article: 'Bikes are undoubtedly...'