自行车— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
考生
Yes, I had a bike like I had like 3 different bikes because I love to ride a bike.
考官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
考生
No, I don't think they are popular in my country because we have a lot of hills, so it's very difficult to ride a bike in it. But we are starting to have a lot of electric bikes. So yeah, it's easier to travel by bike.
評估
總分
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
分數: 68.0建議: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and vary vocabulary (e.g., use 'owned' or 'several').
範例: Yes. I owned three different bikes as a child because I loved riding. For example, I had a small red balance bike when I was five, then a blue frame bike with training wheels, and later a lightweight racing-style bike for longer rides.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
分數: 75.0建議: Provide a clear direct answer, then give balanced, specific reasons and a short prediction or example. Use linking words (e.g., 'however', 'because', 'for example') and avoid filler words like 'so' and 'yeah'. Keep to 3–4 sentences.
範例: Not really. Because our region is very hilly, many people find cycling difficult for daily travel. However, electric bikes are becoming more common, which makes commuting by bike easier; for example, delivery riders now use e-bikes on steep streets.
'/%3e%3c/svg%3e)