自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct response (yes/no or brief statement) and add one or two specific supporting details. Keep answers natural and concise, up to five sentences, and avoid repeating the prompt. Use a clear topic sentence, then a supporting detail with a linking word.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I used it to ride to school and the park almost every day.

建議: The answer conveys the main idea but is informal and slightly disorganized. Start with a clear topic sentence, then use a linking word and give one or two specific reasons or examples. Replace fillers (uh, like, you know) with more formal language and use precise vocabulary (e.g., "bike-sharing schemes," "affordable"). Keep the answer within five concise sentences.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many cities now have bike-sharing schemes. For example, there are thousands of public bicycles available, which makes short trips convenient and affordable for commuters.

× Uh, yeah, I think so 'cause there's like a lot of public bikes just provided for, you know, citizen to travel is very convenient and it's so cheap.

✓ Uh, yeah, I think so, 'cause there are a lot of public bikes provided for citizens to travel; it's very convenient and very cheap.

Problems: incorrect use of 'there's' with plural noun, incorrect singular 'citizen' instead of plural, awkward word order and redundancy. Grammar types: 'There be issue' (3) and 'Singular and plural issue' (1) and 'Sentence structure errors' (26). Correction details: Use 'there are' for plural existence. Use plural 'citizens'. Place 'provided for citizens to travel' as a concise clause and split into two coordinated clauses 'it's very convenient and very cheap' for clarity. Suggestions: ensure subject-verb agreement with 'there is/there are', match noun number, and simplify sentence by using clear clause boundaries and parallel adjectives.