自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is direct but too short. Give a brief topic sentence then add one or two specific supporting details (where you rode it, how often, or a memory) using a linking word to make it coherent. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that I used almost every day after school, especially around my neighborhood park. It helped me learn balance quickly and was my favorite way to spend time with friends.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains hesitations, repetition, and some awkward phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific reasons or examples, using linking words (for example, because, however, therefore). Reduce fillers and repetition to sound more natural.

範例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because the climate is often extremely hot, which makes cycling uncomfortable during much of the year. In addition, many people prefer motorbikes or cars for convenience and safety, so cycling is mainly seen in cooler seasons or in parks when the weather is pleasant.

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked a question in the past simple ('Did you have a bike...?') which uses the auxiliary did; the short affirmative response should use did + base verb or a short form. Saying 'Yes, I had' is awkward because 'have' in this context requires the auxiliary 'did' in a short answer. Use 'Yes, I did' or 'Yes, I had one' to be clear. Suggestion: Answer with 'Yes, I did' or 'Yes, I had one.'

× No, I don't feel that uh, uh, the bikes are popular in my country because of of the hot weather in our country.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because of the hot weather.

Use 'think' instead of 'feel' when expressing an opinion about a general fact. 'The bikes' is unnecessary; in general statements about a category, use the plural without the definite article ('bikes are popular'). Also remove the repeated 'of' and redundant 'in our country'. Suggestion: Use 'No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because of the hot weather.'

× So not a lot of people uh, prefer to use bikes or ride bikes.

✓ So not a lot of people prefer to use or ride bikes.

The sentence's meaning is present general fact, so simple present is correct; remove filler 'uh' and slightly reorder to avoid repetition. Keep 'prefer to use or ride bikes' for clearer structure. Suggestion: Say 'So not a lot of people prefer to use or ride bikes.'

× So maybe they use their bikes in winters on or in beautiful weathers only.

✓ So maybe they use their bikes only in winter or in good weather.

Use 'in winter' (not 'in winters') for seasonal reference and 'good weather' rather than 'beautiful weathers'. The adverb 'only' should be placed before the time expressions to show limitation. Also 'on' is incorrect for seasons or weather. Suggestion: 'So maybe they use their bikes only in winter or in good weather.'