自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 答题没有直接回应问题且重复了考官的话。需要直接给出主题句，然后用一到两个具体细节补充。注意句子结构与时态（过去时），避免重复。可以使用连接词如“but”或“however”来丰富答案。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bicycle with training wheels, and I learned to ride it in the park near my home. I remember practicing every weekend until I could ride without help.

建議: 表达不清且语法、词汇错误较多。需要先给出明确观点，然后用一到两个具体理由支持，使用正确的时态和固定搭配（e.g. “more popular”, “due to”）。尽量避免重复或无意义的词。

範例: I don't think traditional bicycles are very popular in my country. In recent years, many people prefer electric cars and scooters because they are faster and more convenient for city travel. As a result, you see fewer people riding ordinary bikes on the streets.

× I don't think so. My country has have a advance in new technology like electric car.

✓ I don't think so. My country has made advances in new technology, such as electric cars.

问题属于“现在时使用错误”。原句中“has have”是多余且时态混乱；“a advance”中冠词与名词单复数不一致，应为复数“advances”或使用不可数形式“advance”。此外“electric car”应使用复数“electric cars”或在前面加冠词。建议：用现在完成时表达到目前为止取得的进展，且注意主谓与冠词、单复数一致。

× Electric motorcycle yes no no one read a bike in the street.

✓ You rarely see bicycles in the streets; instead, you see electric motorcycles.

问题属于“句子结构错误”。原句词序混乱且使用了错误单词“read”代替“ride/see”，语义不清。应重构句子，表达“街上几乎看不到自行车，而是看到电动摩托车”。建议：使用主语+谓语+宾语的完整结构，选择正确的动词（see/ride），并用频率副词（rarely）或否定词（hardly）来表达频率。