自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cách cải thiện: Trả lời nên dùng thì quá khứ và câu chủ đề rõ ràng; tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai (ví dụ “have” → “had”, “can good at” → “became better at” hoặc “got better at”). Thêm một hoặc hai câu chi tiết hỗ trợ với liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic. Ví dụ nêu thời điểm, tần suất hoặc lợi ích cụ thể sẽ giúp tăng điểm. Chú ý giới hạn tối đa 5 câu.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it almost every day, which helped me become confident on the road. For example, cycling to school taught me balance and traffic awareness, so later I found it easier to learn to drive.

建議: Cách cải thiện: Trả lời nên đầy đủ hơn thay vì chỉ đồng ý; dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung lý do cụ thể với liên từ (because, because of, therefore...). Tránh trả lời ngắn lặp lại; cung cấp ví dụ hoặc so sánh ngắn để minh họa mức độ phổ biến. Giữ tối đa 5 câu.

範例: Yes, I do think bikes are popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. In cities, bicycles are common among students and workers since they are cheap and convenient, and some areas also have bike lanes which encourage cycling.

× Yes, I have because it's very good for me.

✓ Yes, I did because it was very good for me.

The student is answering a past-tense question ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'), so verbs should be in the past tense. 'Have' is present tense; use 'did' (auxiliary for past simple) and change 'is' to 'was' to match past time. Suggestion: Use past simple for past situations (Did you have... ? -> Yes, I did. It was...).

× I can ride a bike, so I can good at driving.

✓ I could ride a bike, so I was good at riding.

The original sentence misuses modal 'can' for a past ability and uses adjective 'good' without appropriate structure. For past ability, use 'could' or 'was able to'. Also the phrase 'good at driving' is incorrect contextually (riding a bike vs driving); use 'good at riding' or 'good at driving a car' if intended. Suggestion: Match ability modal to past ('could') and use 'good at' + gerund ('good at riding').

× Do. Yes I do.

✓ Yes, I do.

The reply 'Do.' is a fragment and redundant. A simple affirmative answer 'Yes, I do.' correctly responds to 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?'. Suggestion: Avoid extra one-word fragments; use a complete short answer 'Yes, I do.'.