自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有两处主要问题：一是把考官的问题重复为疑问句而非回答；二是动词时态错误（应使用过去时）。改进建议：直接用一句话回答问题（肯定或否定），然后用一到两句具体细节支持回答。使用正确时态并加入连接词使表达更自然。例如说明你是否拥有自行车、何时拥有、如何使用等。

範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven and I used to ride it to the park every weekend. Because it was close to my house, I practiced there often and learned to ride without training wheels within a few months.

建議: 回答方向正确但不够自然和具体：避免填充词（如 uh），修正代词和反身代词错误（用 "relax" 不需反身代词或用 "relax themselves" 可接受但更自然可说 "relax" 或 "relieve stress"），并加入具体细节支持观点。改进建议：用主题句直接回答，然后用连接词（for example, because, so）给出具体原因或例子，控制在三到四句内。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, I often see commuters riding bikes to work and families cycling in parks on weekends. This is partly because cycling is cheap and good for health.

× Do you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

该句使用的是过去时态的时间状语“when you were a child（当你是个孩子时）”，所以主句也应使用一般过去时。原句用现在时“Do you have...”与时间状语时态不一致，造成句子结构错误。建议：遇到表示过去的时间状语（如 when you were... / last year / in 2005 等），将主句动词改为一般过去时（Did + 主语 + 动词原形）。

× That's a good way to relax themselves.

✓ That's a good way to relax.

原句使用反身代词“themselves”与先行词不明确且语法多余。此处说法是泛指，看别人骑车是放松的好方式，正确表达可直接用不及物动词短语“to relax”或用不定式结构“That’s a good way to relax.” 若要使用反身代词，应有明确的先行词且人称一致，例如“They relax themselves”但口语中通常省略反身代词并直接说“relax”。建议：去掉多余的反身代词或根据上下文改为合适的人称。