自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar, tense consistency and sentence structure. Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then give one or two concise supporting details using linking words. Correct subject-verb agreement and use past tense throughout. Be more specific about frequency or feelings to enrich the answer.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, my friend had one, so we often borrowed her bike when we went out to play. I remember enjoying short rides around the neighborhood, especially on weekends.

建議: Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons and examples. Use plural/singular agreement and avoid filler words. Add linking words (for example, because, therefore) and give one concrete example (types of biking, events) to strengthen your answer.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because we have many mountains and scenic trails. As a result, mountain biking is common and there are frequent local competitions and weekend group rides for enthusiasts.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't have' with past time reference 'when I was a child.' Use past tense 'didn't have' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: use past tense verbs consistently for past events (e.g., 'I didn't have...').

× Uh, my friend have one.

✓ Uh, my friend had one.

The subject 'my friend' is singular, so the verb must agree. Because the sentence refers to the past ('when I was a child' context), use past tense 'had.' Avoid 'have' which is present tense and does not agree here. If describing present possession, use 'has' for third-person singular.

× So basically when we go out to play we just borrow her bike.

✓ So basically when we went out to play we just borrowed her bike.

The clause refers to past habitual actions, so verbs should be in the past tense ('went', 'borrowed') rather than present simple. Using past tense keeps the narrative consistent. Suggestion: match verb tense to the time frame of the story (past for childhood events).

× Yes, it is.

✓ Yes, they are.

The question asks 'Do you think bikes are popular...' The subject 'bikes' is plural, so the answer should use a plural pronoun/verb. 'It is' refers to a singular noun; replace with 'they are' to agree with plural 'bikes.' Also use present tense to answer a general present-fact question.

× Our country is known to have many mountains, so there's a lot of, uh, bikers here and uh, I think they are uh, also competing.

✓ Our country is known for having many mountains, so there are a lot of bikers here, and I think they also compete.

Several issues: use 'known for having' instead of 'known to have' for natural phrasing (both possible but 'known for having' is clearer), replace 'there's a lot of bikers' with 'there are a lot of bikers' to match plural noun agreement, and change 'they are also competing' to simple present 'they also compete' to state a general fact. Suggestions: ensure subject-verb agreement with plural nouns and use simple present for habitual or general activities.