自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct response with a clear topic sentence (yes/no), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and no more than 4–5 short sentences.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was about seven. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I rode it around the neighborhood every afternoon. Because my parents lived near a park, I often practised there with my older sister’s help.

建議: Again you repeated the question rather than answering. State your opinion clearly, then support it with specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because, so, therefore). Keep answers concise and coherent.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. For instance, many people use bicycles for short commutes because traffic is bad and bike lanes are being built. Therefore, cycling is becoming a practical and affordable option for daily travel.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original student response repeated the question word-for-word, so it did not provide a proper answer. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) because a question was echoed instead of producing a declarative answer with a verb. Correction uses past simple tense 'had' to match the question's past-time frame. Suggestion: when answering yes/no questions about the past, use a short answer plus a full sentence (e.g., 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child' or 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child').

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student repeated the question rather than giving an answer; this is a sentence structure error (ID 26). The corrected response keeps present simple tense 'think' to match the question and provides a declarative statement. Suggestion: avoid repeating the examiner's question; instead answer directly (Yes/No) and follow with a full sentence or reason (e.g., 'Yes, I think bikes are popular because...').