自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ответ содержит несколько грамматических ошибок, неверные времена и неестественные фразы. Нужно: 1) использовать прошедшее время (I didn't have), 2) избегать тавтологии и излишних слов, 3) дать краткое объяснение и, при необходимости, одну поддерживающую деталь, используя связку (because, so, as a result). Примерный желаемый объём — не более 3–4 предложений.

範例: I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought it was too dangerous for me at that age. As a result, I usually walked or took the bus to school, and I only learned to ride when I was a teenager.

建議: Ответ плохо организован, содержит повторения и ошибки во временах и артиклях. Нужно: 1) начать с чёткого мнения (Yes/No) + краткое объяснение, 2) избегать повторов («I never see, I never saw»), 3) привести конкретное сравнение с примером страны и причину различия (например, климат, инфраструктура). Используйте связки (because, for example, compared to).

範例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my city in Russia because the winters are long and there are few bike lanes. For example, in many European cities like Amsterdam, cycling is common due to better infrastructure and milder weather.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child because I was a child that it is so dangerous to have a bike in a small age.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I thought it was too dangerous to ride a bike at a young age.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't have' with past time 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'didn't have'. 'I was a child that it is so dangerous' is ungrammatical—use 'I thought it was too dangerous'. 'In a small age' is incorrect; use 'at a young age'. Improve by keeping consistent past tense for past events and using natural phrases: 'didn't have', 'thought', 'too dangerous', 'at a young age'.

× No, I don't think so, because I live in Russia and here I never see, I never saw a bike here.

✓ No, I don't think so, because I live in Russia and I have never seen many people riding bikes here.

The student uses present simple 'don't think' (acceptable) but mixes 'never see' and 'never saw'. For a situation continuing to the present, use present perfect 'have never seen'. Also 'I never see' is incomplete—better: 'I have never seen many people riding bikes here'. Maintain tense consistency and use present perfect for experiences up to now.

× Maybe if we lived in Thailand or the European country, maybe there was bikes there, a lot of popular.

✓ Maybe if we lived in Thailand or a European country, bikes would be very popular there.

The original mixes past hypothetical 'if we lived' with 'maybe there was bikes there' (incorrect tense and plural form). For hypothetical present situations use conditional: 'If we lived..., bikes would be...'. Also 'the European country' is incorrect article use; say 'a European country'. 'There was bikes' has subject-verb agreement error and wrong tense; use 'bikes would be very popular there'.