自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence then give one or two brief supporting details. Avoid filler words (uh, um) and use correct tense (past). Use linking words if adding a reason. For example, say you didn’t have one and explain why or what you used instead.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school or took the bus because my family lived far from other children and my parents preferred public transport for safety.

建議: Give a clear opinion plus a specific reason or example using linking words. Remove hesitations and expand slightly (no more than 3–4 sentences) to sound natural and informative.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting to avoid traffic. For instance, in big cities you can see dedicated bike lanes and many students and office workers cycling to work.

× Uh, no, I have a no, I did not bike uh, when I am child.

✓ Uh, no, I did not have a bike when I was a child.

The student mixes present and past tense and uses incorrect verb forms. The question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so the sentence should use past tense consistently: 'did not have' (negative past) and 'was' (past form of 'be'). Also 'bike' as a verb is unnatural here; use the noun 'a bike'. Suggestion: keep all verbs in past tense when referring to past situations (e.g., 'I did not have a bike when I was a child').

× Uh, yes, uh, I think, uh, bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Uh, yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

This sentence is mostly correct but contains unnecessary filler sounds ('uh') and extra commas. The tense and structure are appropriate for a general present-time statement. Suggestion: remove fillers for clarity and fluency: 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.'