自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., "Yes, I did"). Avoid repetition and fix tense/wording errors. Add one or two brief supporting details using linking words (e.g., "because" or "so"). Keep to a maximum of about 2–4 short sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle from the age of six because I loved riding around the neighborhood. Because I rode it every day, I became quite confident and learned to cycle long distances.

建議: Answer directly and use correct vocabulary and grammar. Start with a clear opinion ("Yes, they are"). Use linking words ("because", "for example") and correct plural/forms ("children", "bikes"). Give a specific reason or short example and avoid hesitations or contradictory phrases like "I thought" unless explaining change of view.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and children often ride to school. For example, in my city nearly every child owns a bicycle and there are dedicated bike lanes in many neighborhoods.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question asks about a past situation ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. 'I have' is present tense and incorrect here; use the past simple 'I did' to answer 'Did you have...?'. Suggestion: Use past simple for completed past events (Did you have? -> I did).

× I had a bike when I was a child because I'm very I was very fond of riding.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child because I was very fond of riding.

The speaker mixed present and past ('I'm very I was very fond'). The context is past, so both clauses should be past tense. Remove the extra 'I'm' and use 'I was very fond of riding.' Suggestion: Keep tense consistent in a sentence describing past experiences.

× Yes, I thought, but I think bugs are very popular in my country because every children has a bike in in my city.

✓ Yes, I thought so, but I think bikes are very popular in my country because every child has a bike in my city.

Multiple issues: 'I thought' without 'so' is incomplete; context mixes past and present — 'I think' is fine for current opinion. 'bugs' is a typo for 'bikes'. 'every children has' has subject-verb and singular/plural errors: 'every' requires singular noun 'child' and singular verb 'has'. Also remove repeated 'in'. Suggestion: Use 'every child has' for general statements, ensure pronoun/noun number matches 'every' with singular, and proofread for typos like 'bugs' vs 'bikes'.