自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Pronunciation, accuracy and coherence need improvement. Correct the word mistake (“bite” → “bike”) and make the answer more direct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 4–5 sentences).

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I enjoyed riding it around my neighborhood because it gave me freedom and helped me make friends. For example, every afternoon I would race with my neighbors to the park, which made cycling a memorable part of my childhood.

建議: Grammar and cohesion need slight improvement. Use a clear topic sentence and link supporting reasons with cohesive devices. Be more specific with examples and avoid repetition. Keep sentences concise and vary vocabulary (e.g., “motor vehicles,” “commute”).

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use them because they are affordable and practical for daily commuting; for instance, factory workers often cycle to work to save money. In addition, many children ride bikes to school, especially in smaller towns where distances are short.

× Yes, I had a bite when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student wrote 'bite' (a different noun) instead of 'bike'. This is a word choice error rather than grammar, but it results in an incorrect singular noun. Correct word 'bike' matches the intended meaning. Suggestion: proofread for typos and ensure noun choice matches context. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× It was an enjoyable experience when I rode a bike.

✓ Riding a bike was an enjoyable experience.

The original sentence is grammatical but awkwardly phrased for a general statement about a past habit. Rewriting with the gerund phrase 'Riding a bike' makes the sentence clearer and more natural. Suggestion: use gerund subjects for general experiences or habits. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× That's why I left cycling with my bike.

✓ That's why I stopped cycling with my bike.

The verb 'left' with 'cycling' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is to stop doing the activity. Use 'stopped cycling' to indicate ceasing the activity. Also 'with my bike' is redundant but can remain to emphasize the object. Suggestion: use 'stop/quit' + gerund to express ceasing an action. Grammar problem type ID:26

× It is very popular in my country because some people cannot afford vehicles, that's why they prefer to buy a bike to go to their workplace and some kids like to ride a bike to the school as well.

✓ Bikes are very popular in my country because some people cannot afford vehicles, so they prefer to buy a bike to go to work, and some kids like to ride a bike to school as well.

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