自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Correct the tense and make the reply more natural and slightly expanded. Start with a clear topic sentence using past tense, then add one short supporting detail (why you liked it or a memory). Keep it within 2–3 sentences and avoid repetition.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I loved riding it around my neighborhood after school because it gave me a lot of freedom and fun.

建議: Make the opinion clearer, fix grammar and word choice, and give one specific reason with a linking word. Use singular/plural agreement and remove fillers like “umm.” Keep it to 2–3 sentences and add a brief example or comparison.

範例: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because public transport is well developed. For example, people usually prefer taking buses or the subway since they are faster and more convenient for commuting.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence incorrectly uses the present tense verb 'have' with a past time reference 'when I was a child'. This is a present vs past tense error. Use the past tense 'had' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: match verb tense to the time marker (use past tense for events in the past).

× I don't think bikes are popular in my country because the infrastructure of the public in my country are completed such as bus and subway.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular in my country because public transport infrastructure, such as buses and subways, is well developed.

Multiple issues: tense and agreement and word choice. The phrase 'infrastructure of the public in my country are completed' is ungrammatical. 'Infrastructure' is a singular noun and requires singular verb 'is'; 'public' should be 'public transport' or 'public transportation'; 'bus and subway' should be plural 'buses and subways' or 'the bus and subway systems'. Use 'well developed' instead of 'completed'. Suggestion: use 'public transport infrastructure is well developed' and make vehicles plural to match general reference.

× There are lots of umm lines to go somewhere you want to go.

✓ There are lots of lines you can take to get where you want to go.

This sentence is awkward and has filler ('umm') and incorrect phrasing 'lines to go somewhere you want to go'. Improve clarity and structure: use 'lines you can take' and 'to get where you want to go'. Suggestion: remove fillers and restructure the clause for natural English.