自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Sai ngữ pháp và không trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi. Cần dùng thì quá khứ đơn để nói về quá khứ, sửa cấu trúc câu và trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng. Thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ loại xe, ai tặng, thường dùng để làm gì) và dùng liên từ đơn giản nếu cần.

範例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was a small red bike that my parents bought for me, and I used it to ride to my friend’s house every weekend.

建議: Câu trả lời có ý nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, phát âm (dường như), và thiếu liên kết mạch lạc. Cần trả lời rõ ràng (Yes/No + lý do), dùng các liên từ như "because" hoặc "so" để nối lý do, nêu ví dụ cụ thể (ai dùng, ở đâu, mục đích) và tránh lỗi như "of" dư thừa. Giữ không quá 3–4 câu.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. Many people use them to commute to work or to transport small goods, especially in crowded urban areas.

× Do you have a bike when you were shy?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used the present-tense auxiliary 'do' with a past-time clause and replaced 'child' with 'shy', causing tense and word choice errors. Use past simple question form 'Did you have' for past events and the correct noun 'child'. Suggestion: form past questions with 'Did' + base verb and use correct vocabulary ('child' not 'shy').

× Yes, of course of. My is a very popular vehicle in my country I usually use to transfer my goods from home to my workplace.

✓ Yes, of course. It is a very popular vehicle in my country. I usually use it to transport my goods from home to my workplace.

Multiple issues: 'of' is extraneous; 'My is' lacks a noun/pronoun and correct article; missing pronoun 'it' and wrong verb 'transfer' for moving goods in this context. Corrections: remove extra 'of', use pronoun 'It' to refer to 'bike', and use 'transport' (or 'carry') with appropriate object. Also split into sentences and include the pronoun 'it' with the verb 'use'. Suggestion: ensure subject pronouns are present, avoid stray words, and choose correct verbs ('transport' or 'carry').