自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答太简短且缺乏细节。可以先用一句话直接回答，然后补充具体细节（比如什么时候开始、谁给的、经常去哪里骑、有什么特别记忆），并用连接词使句子流畅。注意保持自然表达，控制在不超过五句。

範例: Yes, I did — I got my first bike when I was about seven. It was a red bicycle that my parents bought for me, and I rode it almost every day after school. I usually cycled to the park near my house with my friends, which helped me become more confident and independent.

建議: 回答过于笼统，缺乏理由和具体例子。应先直接回答，然后用一两个原因或例子支持你的观点（例如通勤、环保、城市自行车道），并使用连接词如“because”、“for example”等。保持自然且不冗长。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, cities have added bike lanes and shared bike schemes, so lots of commuters and students choose cycling as a convenient and eco-friendly option.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子语法正确：使用过去时描述童年拥有的物品是恰当的。无需改动。

× Yes, I think so.

✓ Yes, I think so.

句子语法正确：回答当前观点时使用现在时（I think）是合理的。无需改动。