自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Improve by responding directly with a clear topic sentence and 1–2 supporting details. Keep answers natural, concise (max 5 sentences), and use linking words if adding details (e.g., “Yes, I did. However…”, “No, I didn’t, but…”).

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I learned to ride it in the park near our house. Because I practiced every weekend, I became confident riding on busy roads by the time I was ten.

建議: The student misheard and answered with a different word, then repeated it as a question. Improve by first clarifying if you didn’t catch the question (e.g., “Sorry, could you repeat?”), then answer directly. Provide a topic sentence stating your opinion and 1–2 specific reasons or examples using linking words (e.g., “Yes, they are popular because…”, “No, not very popular; however…”).

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips to avoid traffic. For example, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and shared bicycle schemes, which makes cycling convenient and affordable.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's reply repeats the examiner's question rather than providing an answer. This is a sentence structure/response appropriateness error: answers should be declarative when responding to a yes/no past question. Use past tense 'had' to match the past-time reference ('when you were a child'). Suggestion: respond with 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.' to clearly answer the question.

× Do you think bags are popular in the country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student's sentence uses 'bags' instead of 'bikes', which changes the meaning and does not match the examiner's question; this is a lexical choice and sentence appropriateness error (classified here as sentence structure/incorrect noun). Also 'in the country' is unnatural; use 'in your country' to refer to the student's country. Suggestion: repeat the examiner's wording correctly as 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' or, if answering, say 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.' or 'No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country.'