自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your response shows misunderstanding and grammatical errors. First, repeat and answer the examiner’s question directly (e.g., “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t”) using correct vocabulary and grammar. Use a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details (age, who gave it, or a short memory). Keep it natural and concise, within 2–4 sentences, and avoid repeating the question verbatim. Use linking words like “because” or “when” if you add details.

範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven from my parents, and I rode it to school every day. Because the neighborhood was safe, I learned to ride quickly and often practiced with my friends.

建議: You repeated the examiner’s question instead of answering. Begin with a direct opinion (e.g., “Yes, they are” or “No, not really”) then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Use linking words such as “because,” “for example,” or “however” to make your answer coherent and concise. Include a relevant detail like transport habits, city cycling lanes, or weather to support your view.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular, especially in cities where there are many bike lanes. For example, younger people and students often cycle to work or college because it’s cheaper and faster than driving in traffic.

× Did you have a buy when you were child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used 'buy' (a verb) instead of the noun 'bike' and omitted the article 'a' before 'child'. This is a word choice and article error. Use the correct noun 'bike' and include the article 'a' with 'child' because 'child' is a singular countable noun. Suggestion: learn and review common nouns related to topics and remember to use articles with singular countable nouns (a/an/the).

× Do you think bikes are popular in the country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student used 'the country', which can imply a specific country previously mentioned; however the question context asks about the student's own country, so 'your country' is the appropriate possessive. This is an article/word choice and reference error. Suggestion: use possessive adjectives (my/your/our) when referring to the speaker's or listener's country to make meaning clear.