自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Bạn đã chỉ lặp lại câu của giám khảo thay vì trả lời. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, dùng một câu chủ đề nêu rõ có hay không, sau đó thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: độ tuổi, ai tặng, bạn đi đâu) và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Giữ tổng số câu không quá 5 câu.

範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven as a birthday present from my parents, and I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood every day. Because it was lightweight and had training wheels at first, I learned to balance quickly and became confident riding on small roads.

建議: Bạn lại lặp lại câu của giám khảo thay vì đưa ý kiến. Hãy nêu quan điểm rõ ràng trong câu chủ đề (có/không/khá phổ biến), rồi giải thích với lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ (ví dụ: giao thông, khu vực đô thị vs nông thôn). Dùng liên từ để trình bày lý do một cách mạch lạc.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular, especially in smaller towns and among students, because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For instance, many university students commute by bicycle to avoid traffic and save money, although in big cities people prefer motorbikes or cars due to longer distances.

× Did you have a bike when you were child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The sentence is missing the definite article 'a' before the noun 'child'. In English, when referring to a singular countable noun with a general meaning in this context, we use the article 'a'. The correct phrase is 'a child'. Suggestion: include the article 'a' before 'child' in similar sentences (e.g., 'when I was a child').

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses the plural noun 'bikes' appropriately and the present simple question form 'Do you think' correctly. No changes needed.