自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Expand your answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details using linking words. Mention when you had the bike, how often you used it, or a brief memory to make the reply more informative and natural. Keep it under 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I did — I had a red bicycle from the age of eight. I rode it almost every day to visit friends and practice tricks in the park, so it was an important part of my childhood.

建議: Structure the answer with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting reasons with linking words and concise language. Correct minor grammar errors (e.g., remove extra words like “to there”) and avoid repetition. Provide one or two concrete examples or comparisons to strengthen your point.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, when I was in junior high and high school almost every student rode a bike to school, so cycling is a common and convenient way to travel for young people.

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' which uses the auxiliary did for past simple questions. In short answers to such questions, English uses did (or didn't) rather than the past-tense main verb alone. Saying 'Yes, I had' is understandable but not the preferred short form. Use 'Yes, I did' to match the question structure and be grammatically correct. Suggestion: For past simple yes/no questions formed with did, answer with 'Yes, I did' or 'No, I didn't.'

× Yes, I think so because I when I was in junior high school and high school, I used to go to the school by bike and most of the students went to there by bike.

✓ Yes, I think so because when I was in junior high school and high school, I used to go to school by bike, and most of the students went there by bike.

This sentence has multiple issues: incorrect word order ('I when I was...' — misplaced subject), unnecessary definite article before 'school' and incorrect placement of 'there' after 'went'. According to the Grammar Problem Type List, this is a sentence structure error. Corrections: remove the extra 'I' so clause reads 'when I was...', use 'go to school' (no definite article) or 'go to the school' only if referring to a specific school, and place 'there' after the verb 'went' without an extra preposition. Also add a comma before the coordinating conjunction for clarity. Suggestion: Review clause word order ('when I was...'), article usage with common institutions (go to school), and standard verb + place word order (went there).