自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Correct the vocabulary mistake and answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence, one or two supporting details, and natural phrasing. Keep your answer concise (no more than 5 sentences). Use a linking word if you add a second sentence (for example, 'but' or 'and').

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood. It was slow but very sturdy, so I felt confident learning to ride on it.

建議: Give a fuller response that uses the correct subject-verb agreement and add one or two specific supporting details with a linking word (for example, 'because' or 'for example') to explain why you think so. Keep it natural and concise.

範例: Yes, they are popular, because many people use bicycles for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you often see commuters riding bikes to work, and there are also many bike-sharing programs available.

× Did you have a buy when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used the wrong word 'buy' (a verb/noun related to purchasing) instead of the intended noun 'bike'. This is a word-choice/pronoun-like error that makes the sentence meaningless in context. Suggestion: replace incorrect lexical item with the correct noun that matches the examiner's question ('bike').

× Yes, it is.

✓ Yes, they are.

The examiner's question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' uses the plural subject 'bikes' and the auxiliary 'do'. The student answered with 'Yes, it is,' which incorrectly uses third-person singular 'is' and does not agree in number with 'bikes'. Use 'they are' to agree with the plural subject, or reply 'Yes, they are popular' or 'Yes, they are' for short. Suggestion: match verb form and pronoun number to the subject (plural -> they are).