自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your response is clear and relevant, but could be improved by making the opening sentence more natural, reducing repetition, and adding a linking word to connect ideas. Also tighten verb tenses (use past simple consistently) and include one specific detail to enrich the answer (e.g., where you rode or a memorable event). Keep answers concise (under five sentences).

範例: Yes — I had a pink bike that my parents bought me when I was in primary school. I rode it almost every day, especially around the neighborhood and to the little park near my house. Because of that I made close friendships with other children who loved cycling too, and one summer we entered a small race together.

建議: The answer addresses the question but contains grammar errors, unclear phrases, and an incomplete ending. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, correct subject-verb agreement, and linking words to give two specific supporting points (e.g., commuting and leisure). Avoid trailing fragments and keep it within five sentences.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use them to commute to work, particularly in downtown areas where traffic is heavy. In addition, I often ride my bike for leisure in parks or along riverside paths because it is cheap and good exercise.

× When I was young my parents bought me a pink bike and I love this bike.

✓ When I was young my parents bought me a pink bike and I loved that bike.

The sentence mixes past and present tense: 'bought' is past, so 'love' should be past 'loved' to maintain consistent past narration. Also 'that' is more natural to refer back to a previously mentioned item. Suggestion: keep verbs in the same past tense when describing past experiences.

× Of course it's very popular in my country.

✓ Of course they are very popular in my country.

The student uses 'it's' (it is) to refer to bikes; 'bikes' is plural, so the correct pronoun and verb are 'they are'. This fixes subject-pronoun agreement and verb number. Suggestion: match pronouns and verbs to the number (singular/plural) of the noun they refer to.

× I can see a lot of people, they ride back to their workplace, especially in downtown and sometimes I will ride bike to go around the park or also along the road and there are also.

✓ I can see a lot of people riding back to their workplaces, especially downtown, and sometimes I ride my bike around the park or along the road.

This long sentence has multiple issues: comma splice and incorrect verb forms. Use the -ing form 'riding' after 'see' to describe ongoing action. 'Workplace' should be plural 'workplaces' to match 'a lot of people'. 'I will ride bike' is unnatural for habitual actions; use simple present 'I ride my bike'. Include the possessive 'my' before 'bike'. Remove the trailing fragment 'and there are also' which is incomplete. Also 'in downtown' should be 'downtown' without 'in'. Suggestion: break into clear clauses, use -ing after 'see', use simple present for habitual actions, and include possessive determiners.