自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a fuller, natural response with a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Use correct grammar (include articles) and link ideas with a brief reason or example. Keep it under five sentences.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn't afford one and we lived in a small apartment with limited storage. Instead, I usually walked to school or took the bus, so I didn't practice cycling much.

建議: Expand your answer with a topic sentence plus specific reasons or examples, and use correct subject-verb agreement. Use a linking word to connect your reasons and avoid vague phrasing.

範例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are an inexpensive and convenient way to get around. For example, many people use bikes for short commutes and there are dedicated bike lanes in several cities, which makes cycling safer and more common.

× No, I didn't have bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike.

The noun 'bike' is countable and requires an article in singular form. In the negative past simple 'didn't have', the main verb stays base form, but a singular countable noun needs 'a' or 'the'. Use 'a bike' for a non-specific item. Suggestion: use 'a' + singular countable noun (e.g., 'a bike').

× Yes, it's very popular in our country.

✓ Yes, they're very popular in our country.

The student refers to 'bikes' (plural) from the examiner's question. The original sentence uses 'it's' (it is), which is third-person singular and mismatches the plural subject. Use 'they're' (they are) to agree with plural 'bikes'. Also 'popular' correctly used; ensure subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: match pronoun and verb to plural noun (they're + plural noun).