自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two concise supporting details (e.g., who gave it to you, how often you used it, or a short memory). Keep it natural and under five sentences, and use linking words (for example, 'and' or 'so') to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I rode it to school almost every day. Because I practiced a lot, I became quite confident riding on busy streets.

建議: Your answer gives a direct opinion but is short and has a grammatical issue (subject-verb agreement) and lacks supporting details. Improve by correcting grammar ('they are' or 'bicycles are'), then add specific reasons or examples (e.g., commuting, exercise, infrastructure) and a linking word to show cause or contrast.

範例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work and school. For instance, cities have many dedicated bike lanes, and cycling is also a common form of exercise on weekends.

× It's very popular here in our country.

✓ They are very popular here in our country.

The question asks about 'bikes' (plural). The student used 'it' which is singular and mismatches the plural noun. Use 'they' to refer back to the plural subject 'bikes', and use the plural verb 'are'. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with the noun they replace (use 'they' for plural nouns).