自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar (verb forms and tense consistency), reduce redundancy, and add a clear topic sentence plus a linking word for coherence. Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences) and use specific details (e.g., how you learned, where you rode).

範例: Yes. I got my first bike when I was about six, and at first I needed a lot of help from my parents because I couldn’t keep my balance. After a few weeks of practice, I became much more confident, so I often rode to the park near my house to practice tricks and enjoy the fresh air.

建議: Fix grammar (subject-verb agreement and verb forms), add a clear topic sentence, and use linking words to connect reasons. Provide one specific example or statistic to make the answer more convincing. Keep vocabulary relevant and varied.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many students and office workers cycle to school or work because it is cheap and often faster than driving; moreover, cycling promotes a healthy lifestyle and helps reduce traffic congestion. For example, in my city many people use dedicated bike lanes during rush hour, which speeds up commutes.

× Yes I did, I got my first bike when I was about 6 and at first I need a lot of help from my parents because I couldn't keep my balance.

✓ Yes I did, I got my first bike when I was about 6 and at first I needed a lot of help from my parents because I couldn't keep my balance.

The sentence describes past events, so verbs should be in the past tense. 'Need' is present tense but should be 'needed' to match 'got' and 'couldn't'. Suggestion: use consistent past tense for actions that occurred in the past.'

× However, after a few weeks of practice I become became more confident and enjoyed riding to the park near my house.

✓ However, after a few weeks of practice I became more confident and enjoyed riding to the park near my house.

The sentence accidentally includes both 'become' and 'became'. The correct simple past form is 'became' to describe a change that happened in the past. Remove the extra 'become' and keep 'became'. Ensure only the appropriate past-tense verb appears.'

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country. Many students and office workers cycle to school or work because it's cheap and often faster than driving, and it's also promote a healthy lifestyle and reduce traffic congestion.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country. Many students and office workers cycle to school or work because it's cheap and often faster than driving, and it also promotes a healthy lifestyle and reduces traffic congestion.

There are several issues: 'it's also promote' mixes singular contraction 'it is' with base verb 'promote'; the subject 'it' needs third person singular verbs 'promotes' and 'reduces'. Use 'it also promotes' and 'reduces' to agree in number and tense. Additionally, keep parallel structure: 'promotes... and reduces...'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and parallel verbs when listing effects.'