自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答不符合考试要求：语气粗鲁且不回答问题。请保持礼貌并直接回答考官问题。改进要点：1) 直接给出话题句（有或没有自行车）；2) 用1–2句具体说明（比如你骑车的频率、和谁一起骑、为什么喜欢或不喜欢）；3）用连接词（e.g., so, because, therefore）使叙述连贯；4）控制在最多5句内，避免粗俗语言。举例句型可先用简单句，再加一两句细节。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it almost every day around my neighborhood with my friends, which was my favorite way to spend the afternoon. Because I felt free and active, I kept riding until I was a teenager.

建議: 回答过于简短且缺乏细节。请在肯定或否定后补充1–2个具体原因或例子，使回答更自然和信息量更大。改进要点：1) 先给出简明立场（Yes/No）；2) 用because, for example, especially等连接词补充理由或例子；3) 提供具体细节（如城市 vs 乡村、共享单车、通勤用途）；4) 保持句数在5句以内并注意词汇多样性。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities because many people use them for short commutes and to avoid traffic. For example, shared-bike services are widely available, so lots of students and office workers ride them every day.

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✓ Don't share that with your mother, understand?

原句中使用了不完整或被省略的代词短语，导致句子不通顺且意思不明确。根据上下文，可能想表达“不要和你母亲分享那个（东西）”。应使用代词 that 指代前文的事物，并加上介词 with 表示与某人分享。建议：1) 明确代词指代对象（如 that 或 it）；2) 在动词 share 后加介词 with 来表示“与……分享”；3) 保持句子完整，避免省略关键单词。