自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Correct the tense and make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one brief supporting detail. Use past tense for past events and avoid unnecessary words (e.g., "do").

範例: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle when I was about eight, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon.

建議: Give a direct opinion using correct grammar, then support it with specific reasons and linking words. Avoid filler sounds (uh) and unclear phrases ("the plane"). Keep it to two or three sentences and use present tense when talking about current popularity.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, I still see cyclists on paths near parks and students often ride to school.

× 'Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child.'

✓ 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.'

'The sentence incorrectly mixes present tense "do have" with the past time phrase "when I was a child." Use past tense "had" to match the time reference. Suggestion: replace "do have" with "had."'

× 'Yes, I do think bike is popular in our country uh, when I was a little and I rode the bike, the plane, the uh playground and then still see bikes around here.'

✓ 'Yes, I do think bikes are popular in our country. When I was small I used to ride a bike to the playground, and I still see bikes around here.'

'Several errors: (1) "bike is popular" should be plural "bikes are popular" to refer to the general category (singular/plural issue and subject-verb agreement). (2) "when I was a little" is awkward; use "when I was small" or "when I was little." (3) "I rode the bike, the plane, the playground" is ungrammatical and confusing; likely intended "I used to ride a bike to the playground." (4) tense consistency: use past habits with "used to." Suggestions: make the subject plural for general statements, use "used to" for past habits, and simplify the clause about riding to the playground.'