自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb tenses and pronouns, and avoid redundancy.

範例: Yes, I did. My father taught me to ride when I was six, and I quickly learned to cycle around the neighborhood. Because it was convenient and fun, I often rode to friends’ houses and to the park in the evenings.

建議: Give a clear opinion, use correct subject–verb agreement, and support your idea with one or two specific reasons linked with connectors. Use more precise vocabulary.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, many children use bikes to get to school, and adults often cycle for exercise or short commutes, so biking is a common and practical choice.

× Oh, my father taught me to ride a bike. And I go up with my I want everywhere with my bike when I start to learn about it.

✓ Oh, my father taught me to ride a bike. And I went up and down with my friends everywhere on my bike when I started to learn it.

The original sentence contains several issues: incorrect verb forms and unclear phrases. 'I go up with my I want everywhere' is ungrammatical and likely meant 'I went up and down with my friends everywhere' — using past tense to match 'taught' and 'when I started' is necessary. 'When I start to learn about it' should be 'when I started to learn it' to use past tense and a clearer object. Use 'on my bike' rather than 'with my bike' for idiomatic English. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for events that happened in the past, use clear subjects ('friends') and idiomatic prepositions ('on my bike').

× Yes, of course it is very popular because every child have to ride a bike or to go to the school or for exercise in the evening.

✓ Yes, of course they are very popular because every child has to ride a bike to go to school or for exercise in the evening.

There are subject-verb agreement and tense/number issues. The speaker refers to 'bikes' (plural), so the pronoun should be 'they' and the verb 'are' (present plural) rather than 'it is'. 'Every child have' is incorrect; 'every child has' uses singular subject with singular verb. 'To the school' should be 'to school' (no article) for general purpose. Also streamline 'ride a bike or to go to the school' into 'ride a bike to go to school' for clarity. Suggestion: match pronoun and verb number, use 'has to' for obligation, and drop unnecessary articles with institutions like 'school'.