自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答过于简短且时态错误。应直接用过去时并给出一到两句补充细节，例如谁给你的、自行车的类型或它对你的意义，使用连接词使回答更自然。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was six, and I used to ride it to visit my friends near my home.

建議: 回答重复且缺乏具体细节。可以使用连接词给出原因或举例，提供规模、场景或对比，使回答更具体和连贯。

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes in cities; for example, you can often see students and office workers cycling to work during rush hour.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

学生回答的是过去是否拥有自行车，提问使用过去时“Did you have...?”，应使用过去时进行回答。原句用现在时态“have”与问句时态不一致。建议在类似情况中把动词改为过去式（did/had），例如“Yes, I did.”或“Yes, I had a bike.”

× Yes, I think the bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

在泛指事物的复数名词前通常不加定冠词“the”。原句中“the bikes”会使表达变成特指某些自行车，而题目问的是自行车在一般层面是否流行，应用泛指复数形式“bikes”。建议去掉“the”以表示一般性陈述。