自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more direct and concise with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (use "my brother and I" not "me and my brother"), and avoid unnecessary repetition. Add one specific detail (e.g., type of bike or a memory) and use a linking word to connect ideas. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. My brother and I shared a small red balance bike when we were toddlers, starting at around age two. We used it for about two years, and I remember practicing in our driveway every afternoon which helped me gain confidence.

建議: Start with a clear opinion sentence, fix grammar ("have" not "has", "pedaling" spelling), and use linking words to organise reasons (for example, "because", "also"). Include one specific example or statistic to support your view and avoid vague phrases like "so." Keep answers natural and within 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I believe cycling is more popular now than before. For example, during the pandemic many people took up cycling for exercise and to avoid public transport, and bike sales reportedly rose in my city by about 20%. Also, bikes are practical for short trips because you can easily travel from point A to point B without traffic delays.

× Oh yes I did. Me and my brother had this bike before when we were like 2 years old and I think we had it for almost 2 years too.

✓ Oh yes I did. My brother and I had this bike when we were about 2 years old, and I think we had it for almost 2 years as well.

Using 'Me and my brother' is incorrect because the subject pronoun 'I' should be used in subject position. Also place the speaker last in a compound subject for politeness: 'My brother and I'. 'Before' is unnecessary and awkward here; 'about' is better for approximate ages. Use 'as well' or 'too' at the end of the clause for natural word order. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× Yeah, I think bikes have become popular ever since the pandemic. Bikes generally has been used for recreational activities, especially during those pandemic times where everyone is on lockdown.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes have become popular ever since the pandemic. Bikes have generally been used for recreational activities, especially during the pandemic when everyone was in lockdown.

The verb must agree with the plural subject 'bikes', so use 'have' not 'has'. 'Generally' modifies the verb and should come before 'been used' for natural order: 'have generally been used'. 'Those pandemic times' is awkward; 'the pandemic' is more natural. Use 'when everyone was in lockdown' for correct tense and word order. Grammar problem type ID: 27

× You can go from point A to point B by just peddling so.

✓ You can go from point A to point B by just pedaling.

The word 'peddling' is incorrect here; it means selling goods. The correct verb for riding a bike is 'pedaling' (or 'peddling' in British variant is wrong meaning). Also 'so' at the end is unnecessary and informal; remove it for clarity. Maintain simple present modal construction 'can go... by pedaling'. Grammar problem type ID: 8